Reflection #1

   I have used my writer voice most in my blog Post Lone Survivor #2. It help shows that the decision of letting these herders go could risk their life and that adds suspence in the post. The voice in this post is indecisive about what to choose for the option of what to do with the herders. The words show that I am a very simple writer and do not use fancy words like the one we will be putting in our word journal.



I use alot of low informal diction in my writing like using camping and using traits. In my writing I use very little to no formal diction. My diction is very concrete what I put on the paper or the computer is very literal where I should try using more meaning ful words. Many of my stentences are short to medium in length I do not nramally use longer more descriptive sentences. I do not add alot of puntuation in my posts where I should to add meaning and emphasis in my posts.

Lone Survivor #2: http://ryanjeffer.blogspot.com/2014/04/lone-survivor-2.html